I was curious, if this is any good, I wrote this in approximately 2 hours or so, with 20 minutes of me staring into space thinking, but I was just curious for an opinion on my style of writing and how it was done, along with any other suggestions. Any critique or pointers would be much appreciated.
“A hot, damp, rainy day, huh.” Murmured the boy in a rusty black hood. The person sitting in front of the boy turned around and immediately responded “Yeah, tell me about it. I got to walk home in this?!” The boy in black thinking to himself, “Well everyone else does, so what makes you so special?” but the boy